S.S. Rose

Hey there! Great job! I thoroughly enjoyed this poem. Your allusions were subtle, too subtle at times for the average reader (for example, "Once, you winged his shoulderblade"). I absolutely ...

Hello Ace! My name is Rose and I shall be reviewing your work this morning. It is no stress reliever or hobby. I would reword this as "It is not ...

Greetings, Nibroc! I positively adored this poem, especially the first stanza. Actually, I loved all of it. I like the punctuation throughout. THE VESSEL OF MY MIND By Nibroc I ...

Two days later Jesse invited Ariane to tea. “Tell her to come alone,” he said to me. I was reluctant, but Jesse had told me nothing of my sister’s breakdown, ...

The days reflect Like yellow light against the soul Colored glass shattered into weeks And scattered winters – Sixteen of them littering the lawn Prismatic hope breaks Into shafts of ...

Hey there! I liked it...overall quite a good poem. The imagery was fantastic. However, I had a slight problem with "Your small, cute nose." The simplicity of this line didn't ...

Hello dear readers! This story is the continuation of a fledgling post I made recently to YWS called "Jesse's Wine". Any of you who were interested in that might enjoy ...

Were you with me, fiend, A part of the crimson staining blood, The stiff wrists and sharp cold ache – Like ice pressed against the flesh? Were you staring through ...

Hello Auteur...nice to read this. First off, being a grammar freak, I must comment on that issue. Please insert apostrophes where needed, and yes I know this is meant to ...

Hello everyone, and thanks for the reviews. First off, the "tears on paper" image is supposed to convey tears (as in moisture; weeping) being absorbed by paper as one bends ...

Hello there...please rip this one up. It needs it desperately. S.S. Rose Winter is a Live Mind Church-bells ring thoughtlessly: A menial dirge for a useless poet, A gray prayer ...

Hello... First off, you spelled cemetery wrong. That bothers your readers to no end, trust me. Secondly, I thought your poem had some potential, but it didn't flow. You should ...

Hello there... So I kind of liked this poem. I liked the numerical progression of age but got rather bored with the "I remember being..." over and over and over ...

Hello! I wrote this a very long time ago and have no idea no idea what to do with it. I don't want to let it go, though. Any suggestions? ...

Hello everyone! Please let me know if you would be interested in reading more of this. The following prologue is the beginning of the chronicled events of a section of ...